Life 360 – (50 Word Writing Challenge)

She takes her first breath, a joyful cry!

A bubbly crawler.

Cheerleader, ice skater, gymnast tumbler.

The apple of her Daddy’s eye.

Her love turns to another.

A diamond ring and a forever kiss.

Time, children, wisdom and graying hair.

A reflection back….

She smiles… sighs…

Taking her last breath.


This definitely wasn’t easy, but I feel accomplished to be able to join such an amazing group of writers to challenge myself. Hopefully it’s worthy enough. Eh! even if it isn’t, I LOVE IT. Thank you Vincent Mars.



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3 thoughts on “Life 360 – (50 Word Writing Challenge)”

  1. The Fire Department and also for taxi orlando viewing.

    Loewen visited the grave site. Smith, AR on December
    16, 2014 in Ft. He helps people go through the process of dealing with of loss of a” burial tax” paid by all.



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